Scion of Fangor

Hello, my first piece I've posted. Hope you like it! Twilight War The darkness was a cruel master. It surrounded her on every side with closed doors and avenues of ...

The story seemed very abrupt and extremely confusing for those that don't know who or what the clans are. I think if you want the reader to feel anything because ...

Very nice story, I spotted a few missed words, which I can't find now I've read it. Some of the speech seemed a bit unnatural. But apart from that I ...

I really like it, somehow it had a depth into it that sucked me in. It also has a very mysterious air that made me feel like I was at ...